Advertising Design----Task:Self Promoting

We need to make an ads for promoting ourselves, my idea is draw "breakout" the game, and then add my tag line "A tons of problems, and one achievement", to show that while i facing the problems in design, I will finally get the achievement. 

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                               artworks in the early days

                                  Final progress.(20/1/14)

Final Progress (new updated on 24/1/14)